Thursday 2 November 2017
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Hi Jimmy, my name is Alex and I am a Year 6 student from St. Bernadette's School. Wow! This is an amazing poster! The pictures are great and the pictures are related to the writing. Next time maybe you could put a full stop after 'toy' and put capital letters for Hei Hei Road. I really look forward to seeing more work from you Jimmy.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment I'll do that now
ReplyDeleteHi James thank you for sharing that you are having a market day.I like that are lots colours in your poster because it sands out and it makes you want to read it.
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