The prison break
Ugg what happened I,m, I’m in a police van. I can’t move I’m paralyzed.
“Hmm HMMM.”
“He’s woken up.” said police 1
“I’ll get him.” said police 2
It's wearing of.
“I can move!!!”
“I can see that” said police 3.”
“ W-what happened?”
“You robbed a bank, you had loads of men, assault rifles. We even had to kill some of you it was”---
“ I didn't want to do it, it was like I was forced to.”
“ You even had grenades, grenade launchers and, AND YOU KILLED MY BROTHER!!!
“Ugggg”
He was strangling me.
“STOP HIM!!!” yelled police 1
I fainted from the lack of oxygen. I woke up In a prison cell. It was cold, I was starving what's the time. 5:30, I’ll go have dinner…
The Plan…
My friends Dan, Max and a nerdy dude who probably hacked banks, Jaedon and well me Jimmy. We had a plan Max would set of the alarm as a distraction Jaedon would hack contraband detectors and the armory, Dan would get the gun’s and I would get the boat or more of a raft ready.
We do have a plan B of crouse. So Dan gets caught the first one out of Max or Jaedon they. Have 5 minutes to get there or if there’s too much heat by the raft. bye bye last person there.
And a plan C if Max gets caught we Just go make a run for it.
Annnnnnnd a plan D if Jaedun gets caught which is the least likely
And If I get caught then they make a break for It.
That’s why I like my job I have the highest chance of survival.
But first we need supplies and a lot we need to work at the blacksmith, the amery Dan can work there learn escape ruts and the woodworks and I’ll do favors, trade and buy stuff.
But I didn't break into the bank maybe I was on drugs or maybe, I was drugged? That’s it I was drugged...
-Life In Prison-
Well we carried on doing what we've been doing and were nearly ready and making plans. now we're knocking out guards getting there uniforms. And we're nearly ready, Just need good wire cutters and were done.
=The break out=
Were all ready
“Max go Dan go Jaedon hack And I will get the raft ready Let’s go”
“Wait I got a little something I got walky talkys here” said: Dan
“Now let’s go”
Come on where is it. Oh right here… And done Now I just wait.
“I don’t think I’m gonna make it I’m coming to the raft-Dan”
“Jaedon,Max did you get the message if you didn’t come to the raft-out”
Who’s that Dan?
“Dan! You made it Jaedon to where's Max?”
“We don’t know, raidio him” said Dan
“Good idear”
“Max where are you?”
“I’m close Just give me some Time ok” said Max
“Ok but be quick ok.”...
“Max it’s been 10 minutes where are you! There’s way too much heat by the the raft you 3 minutes”
“I’m nearly there just wait” said Max
“That’s what you said 10 minutes ago”
“I’m right there there’s just some gaud’s Can you distract the-
Tink tink
“Like that”
“Thanks and look who’s here Max-
“Shut Up let’s go”
We escaped but Max was sniped...
I never really liked him
I never really liked him
Hi Jimmy it's Jaimie from Room 8 St Bernadette's school.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you added headings for the different parts of your text. I thought the ending was really unexpected. Maybe next time you could cheek your spelling and punctuation, other than that you are very imaginative and I am excited for your next blog post.
Thank's for the comment Jaimie I know I'm not that good at spelling and that stuff I'm more of a math guy
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ReplyDeleteHi Jimmy, it's me Tyler. I like your story and the part where Max got snipped. I've made a story witch I'm in prison. Your in it, Lenny's in it and Max is in it. Can you fix your spelling. Is there going to be a sequle?
ReplyDeleteYour dark you like the part where maxs dies and you need to fix your spelling to
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Hi Jimmy, Its Greer I liked your story. I liked how you put a lot of detail in it. I couldn't really understand the first part it didn't make sense. next time do you think you could try and make it a bit more clearer to understand. anyway I can't wait to see you next piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteIt really does make sense and thanks for your coment
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