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Tuesday, 18 September 2018

The Jelly Fish

The Jellyfish
 There once was a fish who liked eating jelly his friends called him the jelly-fish. He was happy eating jelly and then all the jelly went missing. Then hundreds of jellyfish came, so the jelly-fish sneaked in and all the jellyfish had stole all the jelly. So the jelly-fish signed a treaty saying they would share the jelly and they all lived happily ever after. But this is not a fairy tale a big jelly-monster came and stole all there jelly. So the jellyfish and the jelly-fish teamed up and the jellyfish attacked and distracted the jelly-monster and the jelly-fish stole the jelly back. There now back home and the jelly-monster really just wanted some friends and jelly so they all sheared the jelly and lived happily until they died.

2 comments:

  1. WOW!
    Thats a cool story about the jellyfish.
    Next time you could explain more about why the fish liked jelly and also why you did a story about the jellyfish.

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    1. Thank you
      I was told to write a story about a jelly fish so I wrote about a Jelly-Fish

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