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Tuesday, 2 April 2019

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Pugs can't fly

Moments ago on the 3rd of march 2019 Christchurch
a pug named Pig fell out a window and is
being treated as we speak. He wants a trial claiming
a dog named Trevor pushed Pig out the window
we are yet too know if foul play was involved.

Trevor has claimed “He did not push Pig out the window”
But he may have a motive Pig was not sharing his toys.
Were in court now while the trial is being held Pig has well
paid defendant while Trevor has a community defendant.
There was evidence of eaver of the claims so they were
both charged with Community service for one month,

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  1. Anonymous2 April 2019 at 09:47

    Hi Jimmy it's me Nika, I like how you explained both sides of the story. Next time you could add some questions to hook the reader in. I like the part in the story when you said "Pig has well paid defendant while Trevor has a community defendant". Keep up the great work Jimmy.

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    1. Anonymous2 April 2019 at 09:49

      Thanks for the help Nika I'll try add more questions next time
      -Jimmy

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